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The way I hurt is a crime
And I will never be able to let loose and fly,
Because I am nothing without these problems
No matter how hard that I will try.

I can't help you the way I wish I could
But I will try as much as I can of course,
But I'm still here
And ready to support.

So you can call me a friend
And you could call me your mistake,
Because no matter how much we pretend
We'll still wind up with the same heartache.

I know it all seemed crazy from the start,
And you know that it was destined
For both of us to dwell
On top of these blood filled ashes
That fell from our burned out hearts.
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I didn't want to post it. But i decided to. And if anyone's going to comment, comment on the poem, not my description. Too many people focus on the damn descriptions rather than the poem....
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~candygirl101010 Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this poem makes me sad its like an unrequented love or like 2 hearts ment to be but just cant almost like romio and juliet but better thx 4 posting it <3
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Thanks.
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~candygirl101010 Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
np
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Mood: Wow! ~gothchick913 Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
this is fantastic, and a little tear jerking. :tighthug:
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 8, 2012  Professional Writer
thanks.
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~gothchick913 Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
your welcome
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~topazcat511 Sep 8, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Personally, this poem sounds like it came from the mouth of a guy I once knew rather closely.....I still know him, but we just don't talk as much anymore. This is such a wonderful piece, and I'm glad you posted it :hug:
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 8, 2012  Professional Writer
thanks.
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