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I love to tell stories
All about dreams,
But oddly enough
I'm not what I seem.

I give pictures of happiness
And the image of light,
But I never will shed a tear
From what happened last night.

A nightmare took over
And blinded my sight,
Oh I was alone in the dark
For an entire lifetime,
Cut down to one night.
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I took someones advice on writing, and it really helped it flow out. I'm going to write like this more often, less commas. And you the reader will have to give me the description, based of of what you think ;)
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~Awayfromtrouble Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The ending
I hope I could understand your hurt
alone...
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Hmmm
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~Awayfromtrouble Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
darkness for a lifetime is shocking for me
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
It makes for an eerie ending though ;)
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~Awayfromtrouble Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
true and that's one thing I like about it
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Okay, I hope it inspires you to write you very own nightmare poem!!!~ You should submit it to the group, im sure everyone would love to read it :)
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~Awayfromtrouble Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow didn't expect that
I truly should write my own dreams
Really inspires
:)
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Mood: Cheerful ~PassionateMasochist Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Are you writing little responsive poems? >3
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~Awayfromtrouble Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Just so shocking
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~PassionateMasochist Sep 6, 2012  Professional Writer
Why? O.o
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