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The First Kiss.We both lay there
On top of the bed,
And I lean over
To kiss your head.

You look up and smile
And you tell me no,
I must wait
Just a little while

So I sit there and think
With my arm around you,
As you look up and blink
I smell your perfume.

Each time I smell it
It's like the worlds set in stone,
And every time you laugh
You make my heart roam.

I want to kiss you
In a sensitive way,
So I kneel down before you
Then I grab you and sway.

I put my hands on your waist
Then lift you up,
And I place my lips onto your lovely
And most delicate face.

A Killing Thought.Lost and lonely
In a chilling mind cave,
Lost in thought
From a killing brain wave.

Someone please save me
From this evil omen
That I like to call
My mind.

It's taking over
And it's grabbing the gun,
This cant be real,
Please let me run.

I'm picking up the pieces of this mind,
Searching for a reason
To stay here and love,
To see and not be blind,
To not be a case of treason,
To not finally run
And hide above.

Rose.

All of a sudden I get these flashbacks
From the first time I ever laid my eyes on you,
I remember the smell in the air,
Not even knowing what would happen soon
I knew you would be one in my life; so rare.

Your hair flowed like a chocolate sea
Looking over and glancing at me,
Smiling and waving
As I blush and hide
You had no idea
You stayed in my mind.

I was too shy
To come at all close to you,
I would try to say hi
But no matter how hard I tried
I would always be
The quiet shy guy.

But one day it happened to me
You came and sat in the very next seat,
That was the day I truly knew
True friends were made
I always knew it wa

A Chance For Better Love.

By Tom O'Daniel

Again and again I try to say,
I'm sorry my love I'm childes play,
I'm immature until days sleep,
A slave of love,
Beneath your feet.

I find it cruel to be the one,
Who's always having all the fun,
I'm sorry babe but that's just me,
A hollow head,
Full of blazing heat.

I wish that I were more fit for you,
But now it seams that all I do,
Is pester beauty until it pleads,
Gift from above,
I will succeed.

Just let me know,
Give me a sign,
I always thought it was benign,
Tender love is the way to go,
Tender love is what I'll show.

I'm sad because of how I act,
Give me a chance to prove myself,
I will improve

Electric Angels.

By Tom O'Daniel.

Electric angels,
Fly down at night,
I'm the only viewer,
Of this magnificent sight.

A boy and a girl,
Both angels alike,
Dance through the grass,
In the dead of the night.

Electric blue chills,
Shooting down my spine,
As I gaze from the hills,
These angels take flight.

Right before my eyes,
Two angels electrify the night,
With blue sparks of light,
Up at incredible heights.

They dance away into the woods,
To electrify, what no angels could,
I hear them cry until bright dawn,
Angels electrified the darkened blue night,
The darkened blue night.

Two Loving Doves.I think that you would miss me,
If I accidentally died,
And I think you would love me,
If I wasn't the same guy.

I wish that we could love,
But I'm just not enough,
For me to be your one,
And for you to be my other.

You're too perfect for me,
And I know that it sounds crazy,
But I love you more than the air I breathe,
You're just simply amazing.

I think that you might love me,
But again I might be wrong,
Why can't I just see?
That I will always be wrong?

I hope there is a chance,
For us to share a love,
And that we could be happy,
Just you and I,
Two loving doves.

Denial.Look into the mirror from the other side,
While seeing your reflection it blows your mind,
You twist and turn from that red devil in the drains
Lockdown within silver you're falling apart while going insane.

The only thing I'm getting from you is that you're a stranger to yourself
In that reflection of life's cracked mirror,
You keep telling yourself that you're okay
But deep down inside you're so afraid.

Just hold on and sit tight
You're going to make it through another night,
No more hiding behind the truth
You have to realize that it's you,
No more hiding behind a smile,
But it's alright love
You'll be fine, it's only denial.

Breaking The Chain.

"Breaking the chain,
The mind is to blame,
Not the system of authority,
The innocents not in majority."

You live with the guilt
From the time that you broke,
The world seamed to tip
The universe had a stroke.

Now you must look for the answer
To gain the everlasting power
Of neglect and solitude,
Thinking a lifetime in an hour.

Time isn't passing
A second to a year,
Your life is unfastening
There's toxin in your tear.

You wipe it from your face
And let it drop to the ground,
Life isn't a race
Now your finally sound.

It's A Dangerous World.Look at the world
And listen to its cries,
That it slowly gives off
Now look yourself in the eyes.

What do you feel?
Could you possibly feel right?
Is any of this real?
You'll find out tonight.

When the world fades to black
And you're there all alone,
It will come from behind
And begin to attack.

Don't try to run
It is the world after all,
Your life is now done
Because you turned your back
While the world began to fall.

The Sadist Girl.I was against all girls who were beautiful
But now I have been going against that belief.
A sudden burst of intelligence
Makes all the matters in the word
Fly by with relief.

A beautiful girl has come into my life
With promises of the lovingly sharpened knife,
Masochistic love is what it's about,
Oh I wont feel the pain
I have no doubt.

Drink from my vein
You sadist girl
While your eyes look up like a polished pearl,
I bet it tastes so metallically sweet,
Ah, our love is a burning heat.

Love me sweet
Like nobody else,
I'll give you my life
Without a second thought,
I trust you more than anyone else
It's what I have always sought.

Sadist g

My Random Jester.They sat there so lonely,
So kind and so free,
No friend in the world,
That I could have seen.

I approach them with caution,
And greet them with glee,
The only thought on my mind,
Was that their new friend was me.

A smile on their face,
Came from a shake of the hand,
And I could tell from their grip,
That their life must be bland.

I offered to show,
Just what I know,
How to live life sweetly,
And how to explore discretely.

To learn all the secrets,
Once locked behind doors,
And hear all the truths,
And a little bit more.

But now all they want,
Is to be alone,
For they never wanted this,
The world, or me,
A friend to s

Demon Baal.Say hello to Satan,
You evil,
Evil thing,
Across black skies you fly,
Spreading terror with black wings.

Cry your acid tear,
But soon to your dismay,
It will only weaken their fear,
So go on,
Fly away!

Lightning cries and thunder sighs,
They are both no match for you,
Much louder and more painful than the two,
They will Die,
It's something that you prize.

Satan calls,
And your black wings fall,
Fall to your knees,
And lay under his placid palm,
There is no escaping your twisted fate,
So sleep tight,
Demon Baal.

Time's Drifting.

Walking around,
Along with the sound,
Drifting along,
To the heavenly song.

Float up to the clouds,
With a smile on your face,
Looking down on earth,
While drifting in space.

Let everything go,
And never look back,
You've bean chosen to fly,
But you never wondered why.

Off to a place,
Where clouds touch the sky,
And the sky doesn't race,
So you can just drift by.

A world by yourself,
With the wind in your toes,
Is a sound that makes you know,
That you drift with the wind so you can be free,
Not looking back,
But going as far,
As your own eyes can see.

A Secret Not Worth Knowing.

By Tom O'Daniel

A secret not worth knowing,
That makes me feel so good,
Bathing in their blood was fun,
Giving me an orgasmic touch to the skin.

Silent victims with flaws,
Flaws upon flaws cover their bodies,
Forever to be condemned to themselves,
And never to speak their pain.

They lay in there beds,
That I pre-made for them,
And they sleep silent,
Mouth sewed shut,
Eyes sewed open,
Watching each and every shameful,
Fearless killing,
Made out to be dreams.

A Walk In The Woods.

By Tom O'Daniel.

Before,
Hazel trees whistle in the howling wind,
The branches bend in perfect unison,
To its natural scattered path,
The wind is flashing sheer cold,
It feels so nice,
When nature unfolds.

The tangled brush,
Hums to the beat,
Of every step I take,
Twigs snap,
And pinecones fall,
Under my feet,
And the trees so tall.

So much is going on,
Outside of my echoing head,
But so little going on within,
Hazel trees whistling,
And the wind flashing cold,
A walk in the woods,
Is nature's story told.

Now,
Hazel trees are gone,
There's little air to breathe,
A walk in the woods,
Once great and fair,
Is no l

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Goodnight, Goodnight IIIGive me a hug,
And I'll lay you down,
For you to be happy,
And have a good nights sleep.

Caressing your head,
And rubbing your stomach,
So comfy in bed,
The room fades to black.

It all becomes dark,
And your eyes become heavy,
So you drift off,
In a peaceful,
And calm dream.

Dressed In White.She was dressed in white,
And she began to look at me,
With her dead eyes,
Covered in blood.

She whispered to me,
Saying please help,
But I just went along,
Looking the other way.

I heard a strange noise from behind,
I heard the crack of a bone,
I looked to see what it was,
It was her crawling towards me.

Her lips were pail,
But stained by blood,
And her eyes were dark,
And silently still.

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The Lighting Of A Darkened Heart.

by ~PassionateMasochist, Aug 26, 2012, 4:24:55 PM
Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

Crawling into the darkness,
You can't help but cry,
You're afraid you'll be called heartless,
And they won't wonder why.

They wont care that you left,
And they'll never know why,
They will never understand,
And to cover themselves,
They will lie.

Throw away the cruel disguise,
Of the walls that you once put up,
And let others come and prove,
That you've always had,
Those beautiful eyes.

Forget the ones you left,
They only make you sick,
And lite the fire in your heart,
With the blackened,
And lost wick.

You think that you're undead,
But you've only just been born,
Wipe the makeup clean,
And let the others scorn,
Don't let the feelings stop you,
And let your love be seen.

The Lighting Of A Darkened Heart.by ~PassionateMasochist

Literature / Poetry / Romantic / Teen / Free Verse

I wrote it while listening to, "Smoke And Mirrors."-Black Veil Brides. OH! And it's about a girl who thinks her family doesn't love her. Quite a few of my friends feel that way actually...

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~topazcat511 Sep 4, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

dang, this is is the perfect poem for my heart, I love this, so beautifully emotional

~PassionateMasochist Sep 4, 2012 Professional Writer

Thank you, i think you're the first one to actually acknowledge this poem

~topazcat511 Sep 4, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

well, consider it the start of many more, your talent is amazing

~Shasta-Rose Sep 2, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

Very relatable and very emotional. I understand this very well, especially the way you set up the first stanza. You jump immediately to the ideas of the poem - "You're afraid to be called heartless," "They will never understand," and bring the reader in to ask, "Why called heartless? WHAT won't they understand?"

Not to mention "Crawling into darkness" is a really cool phrase.

You've got great ideas in the fourth stanza concerning the charred wick, but I think this stanza also isn't the strongest one. Maybe consider rewording if you're ever in the mood to go through the horrendous stages of editing.

Interesting way of ending the poem... I like how suddenly we're going into rebirth and change, and to "let your love be seen."

~PassionateMasochist Sep 2, 2012 Professional Writer

Thank you. Very much! Your words mean very much to me shasta. It was really nice of you to take the time to write all of this. And i will check it out and try reediting the verse. Thanks again

~Shasta-Rose Sep 2, 2012 Hobbyist General Artist

No problem!

~Shikyo-Uchiha Aug 26, 2012 Student General Artist

very nice, i can relate i think, good song ^^

~PassionateMasochist Aug 26, 2012 Professional Writer

I guess it could be one XD I will try.

~Shikyo-Uchiha Aug 26, 2012 Student General Artist

ooooh ^^

~gothchick913 Aug 26, 2012 Hobbyist Writer

awesome.

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