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Please know I'm sorry
I know that you're hurting,
Please let this go,
Please know I'm falling,
Down into the lowest low
The one thing that you've always known
But never had the heart to show.

My eyes are drowning
And my heart is aching,
Please know that I'm aware,
I can't see this ending,
I can't understand a thing
My heart is weakening,
It's coming apart too fast
And I can't stand the fact
That it's not going to last,
I fear the ending has already past.

These hearts die beneath the sky
While these eyes drown under the tears,
Our minds cry, gazing through the window
And our tears blur what we should know,
So hold on and sit tight
We have to survive this dreary night,
Again like before I have to hold you
So I know you're safe and not alone,
Sing so I can hear you; shake so I can feel you
Just be there, so I can see you.

Cries sound from under the steam
Caused by tears from a heated mind,
Another night of aching eyes,
It's killing me enough to see you cry,
Why can't this be over
So we both can live on and forget
What happened to make the stars regret
Shining their light overhead for us to see,
That I could find myself loving you
And you could see yourself loving me?

Our minds are breaking
And our hearts are shaking,
Quivering to the sound of just one beat,
It's not ending, these tears that flow
And I'm slowly dying now that I know,
Our hearts are tied, and our conscience is blind
Not letting us leave, no matter how hard we try,
Please know I'm scared, and please know I'm aware
That you're in pain and your heart is crushed,
That I can't cure you and my heart will bust,
All because I'm slipping away
Trying to grasp that one simple moment
That will happen on that mysterious day.
I redid this poem, and I think it turned out way better than before. I hope you guys like this version better :)
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AngelofLight03 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2012  Student Writer
I really like this. It is good.
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alTered-Affliction Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow ... reminds me so much of a night many years ago with one of my exes. Very sad. :( But this truly is beautiful.
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PassionateMasochist Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, and i'm sorry :'(
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alTered-Affliction Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No apologies necessary! That's what poetry does, or should do. It should speak to you, bring out the deepest thoughts and emotions, make you feel. Well, writing in general, really. :)
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PassionateMasochist Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know. I'm sorry that you went through that.
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alTered-Affliction Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well, it sounds like you really cared about this person, at least. Not just toying with emotions. I hope things turn out well for you in your situation.
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PassionateMasochist Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
So do I...
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crashmypartyhard Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
beautiful. don;t really like rhyming poems (they sound so cliche to me) but your writing pulled me in and i flopped around a bit feeling the emotion in this.
i was a fish. you were the fisher.
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PassionateMasochist Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Uhm.. Thank you..
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crashmypartyhard Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
haha i know that was totalyl out of nowhere.
my mind is very...awkward, haha!
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